Poetry Slam

Name breaking

Cassaundra Herald

You broke my heart,

so I’ll break your name!

I'll drag it through muck

then stomp it in the flame

of my rage

(You stupid fuck!)

You loved me not

but used me plenty

showed me your dick

then charged twenty bucks!

(You stupid fuck!)

then showed me the door

Is that what you think women are for?

(You stupid fuck!)

This poem has to be THE worst poem ever created, thought of, invented, I mean it is just horrible. I mean I guess the poet thought by using explicit language it was going to make the poem sound better, but in reality......it didn't fit. I mean, (You stupid f***) that is just unnecessary. I get the entire poem of the woman who felt used.....so she's going to bash the man's name.....but HELLO!!!!!!! She didn't mention his name AT ALL. She just bashed what he did to her. I mean really?? COME ON POETS......YOU GOTTA COME BETTER THAN THAT WHEN CREATING POETRY!!!!! TAHNK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1